I wish

I just can't come up with something new. I feel so blahed out. This is what I wrote a year back and it is still relevant for today. So, I'm just going to repost it. Sorry, Ma!

I wonder,
If things would have been different
Had you been here.
If I would be different,
If WE would be different.

But today,
I wish I could tell you how much I love you,
I wish I could tell you how much I miss you,
Even though you aren't close,
I wish you were.

The distance between is
Not something I can change,
Nor is what you feel about me,
But all I can do is love you
And hope that you feel the same.

But today,
I wish I could tell you how much I love you,
I wish I could tell you how much I miss you,
Even though you aren't close,
I wish you were.

Maybe you too are hoping
That you could be here,
Going for movies and out for dinner
(since you always hated cooking)
Maybe you don't .

But today,
I wish I could tell you how much I love you,
I wish I could tell you how much I miss you,
Even though you aren't close,
I wish you were.

You are the reason I exist!!!



This poetry is dedicated to my mom...Happy birthday, Ma!!!!! :)

25 comments:

  Homer Simpson!

19 April 2008 at 15:13

Nice Nice NIce Nice!
And yea MOM 8->

Cheers!

  Abhinav Viswambharan

20 April 2008 at 11:05

Cute little poem.

Many many happy returns to your Mom on her birthday. :)

  logic

20 April 2008 at 12:14

Nice...great reason for existance.

  Matangi Mawley

20 April 2008 at 15:44

good1!

  huzefa

20 April 2008 at 20:35

Gr8

  Gagan

21 April 2008 at 08:02

nice thoughts !! going to add this blog to my favourties !! :)

  Mohan Kumar

21 April 2008 at 18:22

every one loves their mom , but don't miss them actually ! Nice Poem !!

  Karthik

23 April 2008 at 13:53

Good post.

  vikramk

23 April 2008 at 22:37

nice one...
your creativity is appreciable

  C R D

25 April 2008 at 00:32

lovely poem.

i write poems too..but nuthing for mom yet

to tell u the truth, initially i thot u wrote this for ur sweetheart

did u lose ur mom?

  Sutta

25 April 2008 at 21:44

Pretty Nice!

  unpretentious_diva

26 April 2008 at 18:52

Good poem.

Last line was unreasonable.

You exist, thats why you can love him. He or anybody can never be the reason of your existence, your existence is surely a reason for your love.

  Rashi V

26 April 2008 at 18:57

Thanks you all!!

@CRD : yes , when I was 10

@Diva: Its for my mom and she is the reason I exist (well along with my dad ;))

  Tshhar Mangal

28 April 2008 at 13:04

So intense and powerful
Nice work done

  MADHUSUDHANAN.R

8 May 2008 at 06:50

NICEONE

  Setu

9 May 2008 at 18:17

Sweet. I love it!

  Da Eternal Rebel

18 May 2008 at 13:19

Very touching ....

thats all I can say ... hope you can read the rest :)

  rinzu

17 June 2008 at 14:24

AWESOME...!!!

:-)

  the pink orchid

9 March 2009 at 21:03

beuaty! :)

  Kartz

18 April 2009 at 19:18

Words from the heart. The best possible gift.

Greetings to your mother on her birth anniversary.

Peace. Be well.

  mysterious gal

18 April 2009 at 23:08

beautiful ....some lines hold same meanings with time...so does this poem...the feeling will only strenghten its importance as it gets old...so this poem is relevant after a yr and will be forever....
wish ur mom from my side too....and trust me she is lucky to have u :D

  Story Teller

19 April 2009 at 09:56

Good poem .. enjoyed reading it.. :)

  Leo

19 April 2009 at 18:40

it is every bit beautiful as it was when u posted it last year! :)

ur mom would be delighted at it!

  Da Eternal Rebel

20 April 2009 at 11:13

I dreaded reading this ... and was heavy with unspoken emotions after reading ... most people who commented before do not know the whole thing.

  Anurag

20 April 2009 at 14:19

Beautiful Poem rashi ..I am sure your mum must be giving u the blessings from above :)

Heartfelt poem this :)