I just can't come up with something new. I feel so blahed out. This is what I wrote a year back and it is still relevant for today. So, I'm just going to repost it. Sorry, Ma!
If things would have been different
Had you been here.
If I would be different,
If WE would be different.
But today,
I wish I could tell you how much I love you,
I wish I could tell you how much I miss you,
Even though you aren't close,
I wish you were.
The distance between is
Not something I can change,
Nor is what you feel about me,
But all I can do is love you
And hope that you feel the same.
But today,
I wish I could tell you how much I love you,
I wish I could tell you how much I miss you,
Even though you aren't close,
I wish you were.
Maybe you too are hoping
That you could be here,
Going for movies and out for dinner
(since you always hated cooking)
Maybe you don't .
But today,
I wish I could tell you how much I love you,
I wish I could tell you how much I miss you,
Even though you aren't close,
I wish you were.
You are the reason I exist!!!
This poetry is dedicated to my mom...Happy birthday, Ma!!!!! :)
25 comments:
19 April 2008 at 15:13
Nice Nice NIce Nice!
And yea MOM 8->
Cheers!
20 April 2008 at 11:05
Cute little poem.
Many many happy returns to your Mom on her birthday. :)
20 April 2008 at 12:14
Nice...great reason for existance.
20 April 2008 at 15:44
good1!
20 April 2008 at 20:35
Gr8
21 April 2008 at 08:02
nice thoughts !! going to add this blog to my favourties !! :)
21 April 2008 at 18:22
every one loves their mom , but don't miss them actually ! Nice Poem !!
23 April 2008 at 13:53
Good post.
23 April 2008 at 22:37
nice one...
your creativity is appreciable
25 April 2008 at 00:32
lovely poem.
i write poems too..but nuthing for mom yet
to tell u the truth, initially i thot u wrote this for ur sweetheart
did u lose ur mom?
25 April 2008 at 21:44
Pretty Nice!
26 April 2008 at 18:52
Good poem.
Last line was unreasonable.
You exist, thats why you can love him. He or anybody can never be the reason of your existence, your existence is surely a reason for your love.
26 April 2008 at 18:57
Thanks you all!!
@CRD : yes , when I was 10
@Diva: Its for my mom and she is the reason I exist (well along with my dad ;))
28 April 2008 at 13:04
So intense and powerful
Nice work done
8 May 2008 at 06:50
NICEONE
9 May 2008 at 18:17
Sweet. I love it!
18 May 2008 at 13:19
Very touching ....
thats all I can say ... hope you can read the rest :)
17 June 2008 at 14:24
AWESOME...!!!
:-)
9 March 2009 at 21:03
beuaty! :)
18 April 2009 at 19:18
Words from the heart. The best possible gift.
Greetings to your mother on her birth anniversary.
Peace. Be well.
18 April 2009 at 23:08
beautiful ....some lines hold same meanings with time...so does this poem...the feeling will only strenghten its importance as it gets old...so this poem is relevant after a yr and will be forever....
wish ur mom from my side too....and trust me she is lucky to have u :D
19 April 2009 at 09:56
Good poem .. enjoyed reading it.. :)
19 April 2009 at 18:40
it is every bit beautiful as it was when u posted it last year! :)
ur mom would be delighted at it!
20 April 2009 at 11:13
I dreaded reading this ... and was heavy with unspoken emotions after reading ... most people who commented before do not know the whole thing.
20 April 2009 at 14:19
Beautiful Poem rashi ..I am sure your mum must be giving u the blessings from above :)
Heartfelt poem this :)
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