Let me.....

Broken wings
Entangled strings
Confusion all around
Tied and bound.

I see you weep
even when you are asleep.
I see you cry
to hide it,you try.

All I want is
to be your inspiration
All I need is
to be your destination

I want to inspire 
life in you.
The drive to live
and not be blue.

I want to inspire
love in you.
To feel , to care
beautiful and true.

I want to inspire
faith in you.
Faith in life and love
and to them value.

I want to inspire
you to be you.
Change the world
Change your view.

Let me love you.
Let me mend your broken heart.
Let me close without hesitation.
Let me be your inspiration.



1 February 2009 at 01:04

All i need is such poets to inspire inspiration..!!:p

Loved these lines..just loved them

"I want to inspire
life in you.
The drive to live
and not be blue"

Great going girl..!

  moon's muse

1 February 2009 at 01:59

I loved it is all I can say.


1 February 2009 at 03:18

great one.....
Loved it!!


1 February 2009 at 12:24

seriously inspiring! u inspire me, and inspire yourself too! :)

in a word... "WOW"


3 February 2009 at 06:49

Wow! I thght that my comments might go unnoticed on the lounge coz of the deluge of posts courtesy the contest.
nyways wonderfully written! Hats off!!!! :)
Wish sumone would just say this to me! What else in the world would I want then!
Do Keep coming up wid such gems! :)


3 February 2009 at 20:06

Do you realize,
That i fantasize,
About your poetry?

Do you realize?
That i really like
your brand of poetry?

Loved it


4 February 2009 at 03:58


  Thirumal Rao

11 February 2009 at 21:22

superr !!!


13 February 2009 at 03:33

very nice, very sweet and caring.