Rain Haiku!

Tears want to avenge
Rain from clouds genuine, not.
Rambling to place new.


Prompted at 3WW

This form of poetry is called a Haiku. Prats explains it wonderfully here. My other attempts are here!

I love Prats for introducing experimentation in my style! Thanks a lot :D

11 comments:

  floreta

5 March 2009 at 01:33

hi, welcome to three word wednesday! very creative use of the prompt! i would have never thought of that but it's great.. storms do come and go.

  SweetTalkingGuy..

5 March 2009 at 02:25

Yeah, cool, the Three Word Wednesday prompts make a good exercise, and I like the way you brought something fresh here.

The title 'Rain Haiku' is very strong and could easily be used to front a collection.

Stay with it.

  ThomG

5 March 2009 at 02:33

Yes, please stay with it. This was a great shot of haiku, different. Welcome to 3WW, glad you've stopped by.

  pia

5 March 2009 at 03:17

It's a completely different take than any other. Enjoyed it

  Tumblewords:

5 March 2009 at 08:20

Ah, love the direction the words take under your guidance. Love it.

  Pretty Me!!

5 March 2009 at 08:45

and i love the fact that you did not shy from experimentation !!

  angel

5 March 2009 at 10:02

Very nice.

  Leo

5 March 2009 at 15:11

masterpiece... prats, u started a fever... and rashi's boiling hot! :D

  Ani

5 March 2009 at 16:51

i loved this.. :)

  Amias

5 March 2009 at 16:59

I have got to try this style, enjoyed the read.

  Fledgling Poet

5 March 2009 at 19:09

Beautifully done...so glad you're participating. I'm looking forward to seeing more! :~)