Smile please...





Ubiquitous seemed the gloom,
Inevitable seemed the doom.
Along, you came with your flair
Pushed away all the despair.
Naturally came hope,
Problems were easy to cope.
Because you, a smile, I wore,
Life was a burden no more.

This is a dedication to my sweet friend Leo (Vinay, Vinu). When I told him that I was not feeling ok, he wrote me this. (It is an acrostic so see the first letter of each line)

Means a lot to me
Your friendship

Feel you're there
Really by my side
In gloom or cheer
Every moment
Not forgotten
Dear baby you are

Radiant when u smile
Awesome when u write
Star always to me
How I wish I was
In your heart Always

Pray I do
Love you a lot
Ever if i stop
All that would mean
Still everything would stand
Even God would laugh

Say he would indeed
My dear Vinu, you
Indeed will have your wish
Love her till your last breath
Even from heaven u can see her

Oh yeah, it spells "My Friend Rashi, Please smile." Isn't he the best? 


This is my entry to 3WW. Words this week were : Ubiquitous, Natural and Burden



12 comments:

  Leo

18 March 2009 at 21:16

now thats what i call talent!

3 words and u made a delightful read raash! :)

thanks for the dedication.

  ThomG

18 March 2009 at 21:16

Yes, a delightful read.

  Jacqueline

18 March 2009 at 22:08

Enjoyed your poem. Lovely photo, hard not to smile in response.

  Satans Darling™

18 March 2009 at 22:20

Wow... It is really hard not to smile :) I am not getting tired of complimenting you and telling you over and over again how much I love your work!

P.S. The second poem is so very cute! You're so lucky to have a friend like that, Rashi :)

  Nave

19 March 2009 at 01:36

Well knit piece !!

  Tan

19 March 2009 at 02:10

@ Leo

A very well written Acrostic mate ... good words ... bravo!!

@ Rashi

The poem was good ... happy ... hopeful, as I said ...

The comma (,) is still missing!!

  Tumblewords:

19 March 2009 at 02:22

Very nice, very nice. Lovely smile on the little girl!

  Maverick

19 March 2009 at 06:32

U rock at the 3WW thng! luvly poem 4 dat!
And Leo's piece is sheer talent! Gr8 u hav sumone lik dat as a frnd! am happy 4 u!

  Witchmojo

19 March 2009 at 21:22

Nicely written and very touching.

  Angel

20 March 2009 at 07:07

Wonderfully done!

  Sepiru Chris

20 March 2009 at 10:34

Rashi,

Your tribute to Leo's impact is lovely.

Tschuess,
Chris

  sudharm baxi

20 March 2009 at 15:50

Long live your friendship and
loved your fantastic effort!!