Colours, him and her

He loved flirting with colours. She came into the room looking stunning just for him, her painter. He gave her one look and realized it was all a ploy to get him away from work. She smiled standing at the doorway. He left his easel, his colours for her smile.

This is a Fiction 55 (Well, I'm not sure if this can qualify for it but it has 55 words) 

Prompted at 3WW



10 April 2009 at 00:58

nice and fast!!!
Liked it...
but want to know what this Fiction 55 thing is...
I know very less of all these ...
a little light is all I want...


10 April 2009 at 01:02

it is so so my type, i definitely loved it !!!


10 April 2009 at 01:20

I like this very much, especially how you summed up the ending.


10 April 2009 at 02:00

Hey Tan,
Yeah all 55 fiction are fast paced and hence I like them.. The rules are:
A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:
1. Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)
2. A setting,
3. One or more characters,
Some conflict, and
A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

Many new versions of the 55 Fiction have started to modify on the rules by either ignoring the rule to include conflict, or basing it on a true incident and dramatising it.


10 April 2009 at 02:00

Thanks, Asbo

I knew you of all people would like it. It has the word colours naa :P


10 April 2009 at 02:01

Thanks Thom. :) I like that you always visit :) I appreciate that truly!


10 April 2009 at 02:57

I like this! It works the prompt words in a wonderful fashion.


10 April 2009 at 05:02

This was great!! I enjoyed reading it and ofcourse being a romantic I loved the ending he left it all of her smile!! hahahahah


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  Daily Panic

10 April 2009 at 08:29

very well expressed. 55 words are to capture a moment.


10 April 2009 at 09:35

and what did she do?


10 April 2009 at 16:29

nice post..loved the ending!!


10 April 2009 at 17:06

Guess he did the right thing :)

nice one mate... take care... cheers...

  Story Teller

10 April 2009 at 20:58

A good post. Loved reading it all the same.

There are new prompts in Tell a Tale. Where are you??


10 April 2009 at 22:13

no bang bang???


11 April 2009 at 01:04

Thanks for telling me what it is, Rashi... I have tried my hand at this too.. please check the following:

Send-Off Question

Coming Back

If you like them, I will be happy :)

  Deepika Gupta

12 April 2009 at 08:50

its good.... liked it :)


12 April 2009 at 11:41

Interesting. Sure is different from the other 55Fs that I ve come across...

Keep writing. Spread the voice.

Peace. Have a nice day.

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