Friendship



The prompt for the week is FRIENDSHIP at Acrostic Only.

It is impossible to say all about this in just 10 lines. But I have tried to capture the essence of it in first poem. 

The second one is in a dedication to a very dear friend of mine. To the sloth bear!




Forever seems a time too little. In
Retrospect, I wonder
If I completely understand 
Everything that transpired, then and now.
Never ending love, undying
Devotion, unrelenting trust
Soothing advice, strong shoulders.
Happiness or sorrow, never ever was
I alone. All along, you tagged.
Perish with me, only shall the feeling of "us".

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"Forgive me, will you?"
Repeated he, for the 4th time.
I pretended never to have heard
Echoes of the remorse.
Never ever has a slap been so hard.
Dead inside, the feelings strong.
"Stop," I say to him. 
"Have you realised
I don't ever want to think, ever
Pretend it never happened?"

15 comments:

  Leo

5 April 2009 at 17:04

i told u i loved the first poem! its just lovely. u did somethin i couldn't do in 10 lines. mine is 4 times that length! :D

just beautiful... full marks for u!

  .a.

5 April 2009 at 17:46

I loved the first poem, wow! leo said the same thing, i am not surprised!

brevity - beauty rash!
what else can I say :)

Its the feel that keeps us together. i love ur words.

  Pretty Me!!

5 April 2009 at 21:55

really beautiful one !! loved the first one though the second one was amusing !!

  Maggie

5 April 2009 at 23:04

Friendship is a wonderful gift to humankind and ones should be so thankful if they are blessed with such a gift.

  Nave

6 April 2009 at 00:52

Heartfelt!! No wonder you have good friends :) First one was fairly good but the second one was amazing to read :)

  Lancelot

6 April 2009 at 07:40

DO u want to do frandship with me??

  Arv

6 April 2009 at 13:07

wow... amazing one mate... loved the first one so much... so much depth...

:)

take care da... talk later... cheers...

  Satans Darling™

6 April 2009 at 13:41

It's difficult to summarize friendship especially in a short acrostic. You have accomplished it in 2 very commendable and contrasting ways! Both are excellent! The first one is straight and simple while the second one makes you think... Loved them both!

  Amias

6 April 2009 at 13:41

Two different types of friendship.

I relate to both of the, but I love the first one better.

Very good Rashi.

  americanising desi

6 April 2009 at 21:55

you make me smile.
esp the 1st one.
i cant define the smile.
but yea i look weird :D

  Kartz

7 April 2009 at 14:15

Remarkable compositions... Loved 'em.

Friendship is wonderful; friendship, is divine.
It grows a whole lot better with time, like ye lode wine...


Keep writing. Spread the voice.

Peace. Have a nice day.

  sudharm baxi

7 April 2009 at 15:36

Loved both of them, the second one is pretty innovative style..

keep it up!!

  anthonynorth

7 April 2009 at 15:38

A deep and thoughtful response. Excellent.

  dreamer

10 April 2009 at 16:32

Both the shades of friendship are very nicely penned but to me the second one is slightly more dear....keep writing!!

  Ofira Sephiroth

11 April 2009 at 07:11

Very impressive.