She wished- 55 fiction


She wished for once she could stick to her decision. She wished for once she could listen to what her head said. She wished for once she did what she wanted, what was good for her. She wished for once, he wouldn't come in, flash that smile at her and make her wishes melt away.

14 comments:

  Winnie the poohi

30 April 2009 at 02:13

Oh how I can relate to this. I wish this all the time :)

  Niti

30 April 2009 at 02:55

very nice thought!!nicely written

  Leo

30 April 2009 at 08:32

i hope i never become the "he" in your 55FS who makes her dream melt away...

beautiful write raash...

  Lancelot

30 April 2009 at 09:33

good one...

  Arv

30 April 2009 at 10:46

awwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeee

:)

  Chronicwriter

30 April 2009 at 11:53

did he come?

chriz

  mysterious gal

1 May 2009 at 00:15

it was like i m reading my mind :) i too wish.....
Loved it :)

  Tan

1 May 2009 at 03:37

Wish all the wishes come true! Dilse...

  Femin Susan

1 May 2009 at 06:43

Wish all your wishes come true.
Cheers!

  The Pink Orchid

1 May 2009 at 17:48

@Rashi: meri rockstar!! fantastic!! :D

  Tan

1 May 2009 at 21:29

Inspired...

Thus Wrote Tan!

  sawan

2 May 2009 at 18:45

:) so did he actually come??

  .a.

2 May 2009 at 23:46

nice nice... :)

i'll some write as good too.. deakhna !

  dreamer

3 May 2009 at 15:42

Nice one!!