I want...yes, I want!

Tired of saying that I'm selfless,
I want it all.
I want the stars in your eyes,
I want that smile to be for me.
I want the day to go by,
The seasons to fly,
I want years to roll,
With your hand in mine.
I want your eyes on mine,
I want your lips on mine,
I want to be lost,
Lost in you.
I want you to make me forget
All care, apprehensions.
And remember just you,
Just us.
I want you to make me
Believe in fairy tales once again.
I want you to shut me up
Each time I regress in my ways.
I want to be the reason you
Think life is beautiful.
I want to be the crazy girl
You'll talk to our kids about.
I want to not be selfless anymore.
I want you to make me selfishly
be in love with you.

Ps: Yes, I'm a "rich" girl who knows just how to say I want!



17 June 2009 at 09:10

Ahem Ahem :)

  Misty Rhythm

17 June 2009 at 11:38

woahhh!! may all your wishes come true :)
beautifully written..very powerful!

  Satans Darling™

17 June 2009 at 11:43

Neatly and nicely put :)


17 June 2009 at 14:44

interesting !! specially last lines :)

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  Pavitra ....

17 June 2009 at 14:58

Brilliant....!! Loved it...!! Especially the last line.....wonderful..!

  mysterious gal

17 June 2009 at 16:04

As i told u before...just to the heart poem....one of those fairy tales we wish for and wanna be in one forever...loved it :D


17 June 2009 at 18:22

I hope you get all that you want :)

But don't get disheartened if you don't :)

  I, Me and Myself

17 June 2009 at 18:38

kya kahoon ispe main...as if u dnt knw what i am thinking...but nevertheless sticking to poetry its asusual gr8...god bless ya...


17 June 2009 at 23:57

hope she gets all her wishes fulfilled

well written!

  Comfortably Numb

18 June 2009 at 00:11

You, my friend, are allowed to be selfish for your love.
But not otherwise.
I want you to make me forget
All care, apprehensions.
And remember just you,
Just us.

Nice :)


  Comfortably Numb

18 June 2009 at 00:11

Omfg my HTML tags :|


18 June 2009 at 20:31

Well written! Brilliant!


11 July 2009 at 10:29

Awww!! I want all too:)