tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post5614250285231095921..comments2023-09-10T16:15:38.972+05:30Comments on Rocky Road: An OdeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-32668698223469204142009-03-06T01:08:00.000+05:302009-03-06T01:08:00.000+05:30Thanks for sharing ... would have loved to read it...Thanks for sharing ... would have loved to read it earlier ... a few words can be changed ... but then, this is your first ever!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks again for continuing to write ... for this is how I know you :)Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-56601646862433230472008-09-10T23:33:00.000+05:302008-09-10T23:33:00.000+05:30well after reading this poem two things which i ca...well after reading this poem two things which i can makeout <BR/>1stly.the real and innocent feelings of an affected child <BR/>2ndly the beautiful interperation of the true feelings by the poet.<BR/>actually i'm not a great poem reader but really liked this poem and the whole credit goes to rashi for creating such a wonderful creation ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-39984969152878961342008-07-27T12:20:00.000+05:302008-07-27T12:20:00.000+05:30Its a beautiful poem. In a lighter vein though ......Its a beautiful poem. <BR/><BR/>In a lighter vein though ...had i seen a bug, i wouldn't have asked it questions. I'd have squashed it :D<BR/><BR/>My favorite line, apart from the last two<BR/>" day by day grows this urge to know" ..despite everything, she's learning and living on.WeirdISgooDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03741827825742257250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-44006043423330453632008-07-18T18:53:00.000+05:302008-07-18T18:53:00.000+05:30what does one want after a hard day's work? lounge...what does one want after a hard day's work? lounge about in his home. and when you have no home to call your home i wonder what exactly does one look forward to throughout the day..<BR/>simple yet powerful. :)Arthur Denthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11830300393777362784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-44954865548154201182008-07-18T18:23:00.000+05:302008-07-18T18:23:00.000+05:30first poem is always gr8 isnt iti remember the one...first poem is always gr8 isnt it<BR/><BR/>i remember the one that i wrote when i was 16 ..... :))<BR/><BR/><BR/>anyway rashi,<BR/><BR/>inviting u to join the writers lounge<BR/><BR/>www.weandwords.blogspot.com<BR/><BR/>do join our group blog<BR/><BR/>do leave ur email id in that blog in the first post <BR/><BR/>we will invite u<BR/>hope to see u thereThe Solitary Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15512100204698797001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-87917700126280190762008-07-18T16:23:00.000+05:302008-07-18T16:23:00.000+05:30Wel..its unbelievable its your first poem..Its bea...Wel..its unbelievable its your first poem..<BR/>Its beautiful..<BR/><BR/>YEah..indeed we all wish to be free..<BR/>Well written..Charu Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15559525834162137118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-11014225484222366472008-07-14T16:17:00.000+05:302008-07-14T16:17:00.000+05:30Well i m not that gr8 in poems and its analogy, bu...Well i m not that gr8 in poems and its analogy, but i like the thought and emotions put to it !! Nice attempt>><BR/><BR/>www.anuragarch.blogspot.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388507890298102721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-43884958114776223042008-07-11T22:43:00.000+05:302008-07-11T22:43:00.000+05:30"No home to return to,No one to turn to."Touching ...<B><I>"No home to return to,<BR/>No one to turn to."</I></B><BR/><BR/>Touching lines indeed.<BR/><BR/>You have written the poem in a beautiful way. It is simple yet profound. :)Abhinav Viswambharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10949623491748755063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-90949045083384456312008-07-11T20:03:00.000+05:302008-07-11T20:03:00.000+05:30woww! loved the rhymings!and the analogy drawn is...woww! loved the rhymings!<BR/>and the analogy drawn is really awesome !vanilla skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168465522801309080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-51525141480403418752008-07-11T09:00:00.000+05:302008-07-11T09:00:00.000+05:30Sheer beauty :)Sheer beauty :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-46256338535860422802008-07-10T22:02:00.000+05:302008-07-10T22:02:00.000+05:30Awww thanks guys!!! :)Awww thanks guys!!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-23384449613793485182008-07-10T21:41:00.000+05:302008-07-10T21:41:00.000+05:30hey first poem congobtw very touch ...i can feel t...hey first poem congo<BR/><BR/>btw very touch ...i can feel the emotions and feelings of an affected child yaar<BR/><BR/>really touching<BR/><BR/>Standing in the garden,<BR/>she whispers to a bee,<BR/>"O Bee, how can you be so free?"<BR/>"From flower to flower you dive,<BR/>But at dusk,<BR/>Return you do to your home , to your hive."<BR/>example were touching....<BR/><BR/>any way me blogrolling u <BR/><BR/>dont mindThe Solitary Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15512100204698797001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101632181639065625.post-23291456905835862142008-07-10T21:18:00.000+05:302008-07-10T21:18:00.000+05:30Now this is for everyone who thinks that the First...Now this is for everyone who thinks that the First poem cannot be good/expressive/complete...blah blah..<BR/>This poem will change your view :)<BR/><BR/>Beautiful poem. And the last two lines...<BR/><BR/>"No home to return to,<BR/>No one to turn to."<BR/><BR/>So simple yet so deep!!<BR/><BR/>Cheers!Comfortably Numbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06152961617959695567noreply@blogger.com