Lucky

I wish I could prove
that I truly am lucky.
Lucky just to know you
and more so to be yours.
I'm lucky that you held me
close to your heart.
I'm lucky that your care
even an ounce belongs to me.
I'm lucky that you think of me,
even more that you love me.
I'm lucky that I had my fingers
entangled in yours, more than once.
I'm lucky that it was me, you
didn't wanna let go.
I'm lucky that it hurts you
to let me go.
Why o why, is my luck, then
fading away?


11 comments:

  mysterious gal

10 July 2009 at 19:06

This was amazing ....made me so relate to it...it was just perfect :)

  Arv

10 July 2009 at 19:14

you say its crazy
you say its stupid
you even say its whimsical
but all I can say is that
I wished someone wrote that for me
its cute

  I, Me and Myself

10 July 2009 at 20:53

oh how i wish that ur luck is not fading...amazing babes...gr8..

  Maverick

10 July 2009 at 21:30

a gr8 comeback of sorts.....luvd it! mst b a lucky guy!!!! :)

  freelancer

10 July 2009 at 22:38

awesome....last line was a killer

  roshwrites

11 July 2009 at 00:27

I loved this!! Fab write :)

  Misty Rhythm

11 July 2009 at 02:27

brilliant....could completely relate to what u wrote. i hop eyour luck stays with u :)

hugs!

  ~PrIncEsS nUcHu~

11 July 2009 at 10:31

Wooooooooooohhh!! Wonderful!! Hope ur luck is not fading away!!

  lostmermaid

13 July 2009 at 14:57

impressive !! I have something similar in mind :)

  CRD

13 July 2009 at 19:14

Luck in love?

I thought lovers bent luck in their favor even if luck didnt favor em

CRD

  Short Poems

26 October 2010 at 02:40

Lovely write, loved it :)