Rebel and the muse

"Stars, I want,

The moon, I want.
Rebel, I am,
The unthinkable, I want."

"For you, stars, I want,
For you, the moon I want.
By you, I shall stand
But the unthinkable, I am not.
Rebel you are, simple I am.
Challenge to you, I pose not.
Hence it is me that you want not. "


  mysterious gal

13 June 2009 at 00:16

This was beautiful :-)
A different style with a amazing beauty enclosed

i loved the concept and the ideas of opposites conveyed in a unusual poetry :-)

Love this style! Keep writing gal :)


13 June 2009 at 00:29

i remember this ;)


11 July 2009 at 10:18

:))) Nice!