Equals


Nothing would change
Everything would be the same
Equals we would be
Just as always,
Forever it would be.

The calls stopped
So did the emails.

Left at the crossroads,
Wondering why did I ever trust?
Friends we are not, never can be
When a heart breaks,
It doesn't break equal.

You got a bigger piece,
And a  little bit of me.


Prompted at OSI

14 comments:

  mysterious gal

24 March 2009 at 21:41

The perfect poem for someone who has experienced heartbreaks in life...this is just plain beautiful and apt....and i loved those lines

Left at the crossroads,
Wondering why did I ever trust?
Friends we are not, never can be
When a heart breaks,
It doesn't break equal.

You got a bigger piece,
And a little bit of me.

seriously one can never be the same after being in love once...so true :-(

  .a.

24 March 2009 at 21:50

Incredible last line! just too good :)

  Maverick

24 March 2009 at 22:02

luvd it! wonderful as always frm u!

  Amias

24 March 2009 at 22:11

No, Rashi, heartbreaks are unequal ... and that sucks!

  Charzz

25 March 2009 at 00:10

the one who has experienced heart break can relate to it easly..
Whole poem is goood..
But last two lines...aaah..


You got a bigger piece,
And a little bit of me.

Simply Incredible....
*Kudos*

  Linda Jacobs

25 March 2009 at 05:39

I agree; those last lines are awesome!

  SandyCarlson

25 March 2009 at 06:19

You speak the painful truth. I have been there. Thanks for putting the words on the experience.

  Lancelot

25 March 2009 at 07:17

@ Rashi

thats a good one - its so true that hearts never breaks equally at times one suffer more than the other (or so how a person thinks)...

  Chriz

25 March 2009 at 11:34

shucks..

those lost relationships..

those long phone calls..

why di you say you mean so much to me..

when you say: you miss me..


all in a passing cloud..
***************888

rash.. dont worry girl.. lets gobble some mugs of beer and all will be right.. nice work

  the pink orchid

25 March 2009 at 13:09

lovely poem.. :)


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25 March 2009 at 13:11

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  Satans Darling™

25 March 2009 at 13:34

You got the bigger piece, and a little bit of me...

WOW... simply WOW!

It gives the whole poem a new dimension altogether!

  Tumblewords:

26 March 2009 at 08:30

Ah, the poetry of life - well written and surely felt by many!

  Claire

29 March 2009 at 03:27

Fantastic...love the imagery, love the emotion, love the exit.