This is my entry for today's
3WW:
Words were Cajole, Recluse and Temper
As I looked at her, I felt my
temper melt away. My anger toward fate and life. When she caught my finger with her tiny little fingers, I couldn't help but smile. My little angel who had forced me out of my
recluse. My baby who was now
cajoling me to live my life for her. After my wife's death what did I have to look forward to but the smile of this angel?
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I dreamt a little dream, tonight.
I saw him whisk him away like a knight.
I saw him pick me up from my recluse sole
I felt him cajole life into my soul
I felt tempers no more, hatred ceased.
I know there is hope, in my dreams, at least.
14 comments:
11 March 2009 at 20:33
awwee to the angel! :)
11 March 2009 at 21:30
lovely.
11 March 2009 at 22:39
Felt like standing in the Hospital - Maternity Ward... hahaha ...
Good one, Dad's Angel!!
11 March 2009 at 23:35
this's Beautiful and touchy....
12 March 2009 at 00:03
A lovely, feelgood post.
12 March 2009 at 02:17
Touching. Charming. Heartreaching!
12 March 2009 at 03:56
So beautiful and moving...this touched my heart!
12 March 2009 at 08:32
Very nice. I liked them both, but the first is my favorite.
12 March 2009 at 10:56
loved the short poem here !! really nice use of words :)
12 March 2009 at 13:52
good lord, a baby beauty! :)
3 words make such a difference! :)
12 March 2009 at 14:56
Loved it! especially the poem!
12 March 2009 at 16:48
they this post was awesome. though what were u supposed to do with the three words? use them in an essay\peom of limited words? of a specific format? i loved the poem especially.
13 March 2009 at 15:43
that was just beautiful..
awwww.. i could actually feel the emotions so clearly as if i was seeing it with my own eyes.. :)
loved it dearie
13 March 2009 at 20:34
This was so good! I don't knw wats abt babies but da emotion dat everything about dem stirs in me, cannot b explained in words!
Luvd dis one!
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