Today is Woman's Day and I wrote this poem for Acrostic Only. And on Woman's Day, I dedicate this to a very special woman in my life- My Grandmother.
The epitome of care and perfection.
Her smile -divine as that of an angel
Every action- grace personified.
Virtuous by nature, she
Imbibes everything around with
Reasoning of a calm mind.
God sent, to she is each
Of those who know her.
Wherever she goes,
Of whatever path she takes
May she always be the calm
Azure and the rebel crimson.
Never ever may she change.
Her smile -divine as that of an angel
Every action- grace personified.
Virtuous by nature, she
Imbibes everything around with
Reasoning of a calm mind.
God sent, to she is each
Of those who know her.
Wherever she goes,
Of whatever path she takes
May she always be the calm
Azure and the rebel crimson.
Never ever may she change.
And to all the virgo women in my life and those who light up someone else's life too.. May all our dreams come true and you get all that you deserve.. Be safe!!
11 comments:
8 March 2009 at 21:41
Nice One!
An acrostic dedicated to a gender of a specific sun sign, shld b a first!
bt luvd it! i tld u already it describes u aptly!
wdnrful! :)
8 March 2009 at 21:55
awesome acrostic raash!
i loved the way the first three lines of the second verse form a single sentence...! beautiful wordplay!
amen to the last sentence. may she never change!
9 March 2009 at 00:21
A very nice piece of Acrostic poetry..
9 March 2009 at 02:49
awww thats a nice dedication.. loved it.. :)
9 March 2009 at 07:56
"The epitome of care and perfection.
Her smile -divine as that of an angel
Every action- grace personified."
RV I like this beginning so very much ... and thank you for wishing us all a happy woman's day! right back at ya!
The Virgo women I know are all this an more .. they are very aggressive, and believe me, one does not want to cross one, as they will get a big surprise ..!
Like most, every one has a negative or positive, but the Virgo woman have the unique gift of observing and emulating to the point of perfection. Now this is based solely on my experiences with a daughter who is a very unique "Virgo", and she knows it!
Can you imagine us living in the same house, she emulating my sting and turning it back on me! Ouch!
Thanks for joining in on the fun!
9 March 2009 at 20:12
loved it! and I had read before everyone else.. and being a virgo woman - this one holds a special place.. :)
9 March 2009 at 22:38
Awe!, This one is so cute!
I'm sure that Grand mom would have loved this.
The epitome of care and perfection.
Her smile -divine as that of an angel
Every action- grace personified.
This is something special and unique in every woman.
Nicely knitted piece!.
Good One!
10 March 2009 at 12:20
*claps* for this one !!
10 March 2009 at 20:39
Nice one !! Keep penning !!
10 March 2009 at 20:55
Bravo!
A wonderful tribute poem for your grandmother.
I loved it.
10 March 2009 at 21:00
very beautifully done! aw, i didn't know you're part of 20 somethings! you should add me :)
and, i'm so happy you mentioned international women's day.
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